[Hu Tao didn't respond immediately for her mission came first! By the time she responded back, it was early in the morning as she spent her day in the hospital.]
To the gentlemen of the Feiyun Commerce Guild,
Is this what you've written while I had gone to help the Enma? I am impressed! To think, you've written this in a short period of time! It appears that once I am out of the hospital, we must continue to collaborate as we continue this story of yours!
For what you have written, I do believe it is good. Although, perhaps we can add in some more emotions between the two faction's leaders? I do wish to read more into how Tenkohime feels about Toraguma! Or maybe we can have another leader be involved? Or would that be something for the next installment?
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To the gentlemen of the Feiyun Commerce Guild,
Is this what you've written while I had gone to help the Enma? I am impressed! To think, you've written this in a short period of time! It appears that once I am out of the hospital, we must continue to collaborate as we continue this story of yours!
For what you have written, I do believe it is good. Although, perhaps we can add in some more emotions between the two faction's leaders? I do wish to read more into how Tenkohime feels about Toraguma! Or maybe we can have another leader be involved? Or would that be something for the next installment?
I cannot wait to hear your thoughts.
Hu Tao